Zebra Trivia

Dec 26, 2015 16:53
Few days ago, I wrote an article about cheetahs and zebras.

Today, I will write interesting (maybe) trivia especially about zebras.

Zebras' bodies are black, and white hairs grow in a stripe pattern.

The stripe pattern makes their bodies look big, and it has an effect to keep their body temperature by creating air flows on their body surfaces.

Also, stripe patterns of zebras are different for each individual, and they identify fellows using the patterns.

By the way, the more hot the region is, the more the stripe line grow.
シマウマの雑学

先日、チーターとシマウマについての記事を書きました。

今日は、シマウマの(きっと)面白い雑学を紹介します。

シマウマの体は黒色で、白い毛が縞模様のように生えています。

この縞は体を大きく見せたり、体表面に空気の流れを作り体温を保つ効果があります。

また、シマウマの縞模様は一頭ごとに異なっており、彼らは仲間を模様で識別しています。

ちなみに、暑い地域ほど縞の本数が多いそうです。
No. 1 thebrianwu's correction
  • Few days ago, I wrote an article about cheetahs and zebras.
  • A few days ago, I wrote an article about cheetahs and zebras.
  • Today, I will write interesting (maybe) trivia especially about zebras.
  • Today, I will write interesting (maybe) trivia especially about zebras.
  • Zebras' bodies are black, and white hairs grow in a stripe pattern.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • The stripe pattern makes their bodies look big, and it has an effect to keep their body temperature by creating air flows on their body surfaces.
  • The stripe pattern makes their bodies look big, and it has an effect to maintain their body temperature by creating air flows on their body surfaces.
  • Also, stripe patterns of zebras are different for each individual, and they identify fellows using the patterns.
  • Also, stripe patterns of zebras are different for each individual, and they identify each other using the patterns.
  • By the way, the more hot the region is, the more the stripe line grow.
  • By the way, the hotter the region is, the more the stripe lines will grow.
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :D
No. 2 kou's correction
  • Few days ago, I wrote an article about cheetahs and zebras.
  • A few days ago, I wrote an article about cheetahs and zebras.
  • Today, I will write interesting (maybe) trivia especially about zebras.
  • Today, I will write an interesting (maybe) trivia about zebras.
  • Zebras' bodies are black, and white hairs grow in a stripe pattern.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • The stripe pattern makes their bodies look big, and it has an effect to keep their body temperature by creating air flows on their body surfaces.
  • The stripe patterns makes their bodies look big, and it has an effect to maintain their body temperature by creating air flows on their body surfaces.
  • Also, stripe patterns of zebras are different for each individual, and they identify fellows using the patterns.
  • Also, the stripe patterns of zebras are different for each individual, and they can identify fellow zebras using these patterns.
  • By the way, the more hot the region is, the more the stripe line grow.
  • By the way, the more hotter the region is, the more the stripe line will grow.
good sentences :-)
good job :-)
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
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